Wednesday 23 December 2020

Jingle Bells SUCKS!!! 2.0 - Summer Learning journey

1 comment:

  1. Hey Cameron,

    I’m Daniel from the SLJ Blog commenting team. I’m looking forward to seeing all your amazing blog posts and I hope you’re enjoying your summer.

    You’ve clearly put a lot of effort into this task and hopefully enjoyed it along the way, this is a really well made post. I think you’ve made a really good point and sometimes Christmas doesn’t meet with our expectations. It’s actually more true than you think as the first Christmas didn’t line up with anyone’s expectations.

    But as I said, your song is very well constructed, it has rhythm and rhyme and surprising and humorous imagery and you’ve still lined it up with the melody of the original song.

    Good work Cameron and I wish you a Merry Christmas,
    See you later in the comments.

    Daniel

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