Kia ora Cameron. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. I like the way you included lots of adjectives and described the places you fish. Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!
This is a fantastic snowball poem! I like how you managed to describe so many parts of fishing in so few words! I like the line ‘catching fish and losing fish’ - they’re so slippery and fast!
Have you written a snowball poem before? I hadn’t heard of this type of poem, I might have to try it out!
Do you enjoy fishing with your whanau? I love being outside and boats, but I don’t enjoy fishing as much!
I hope you are having a fantastic summer and that you have gone fishing! Keep up the awesome mahi.
Kia ora Cameron. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. I like the way you included lots of adjectives and described the places you fish. Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Cameron,
ReplyDeleteThis is a fantastic snowball poem! I like how you managed to describe so many parts of fishing in so few words! I like the line ‘catching fish and losing fish’ - they’re so slippery and fast!
Have you written a snowball poem before? I hadn’t heard of this type of poem, I might have to try it out!
Do you enjoy fishing with your whanau? I love being outside and boats, but I don’t enjoy fishing as much!
I hope you are having a fantastic summer and that you have gone fishing! Keep up the awesome mahi.
Ngā mihi,
Lauren