Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Great 'show not tell' Cameron. I especially liked how you changed the mood for the wharf page. Ka pai! Keep up the hard work in lockdown Cameron.
My goodness, Cameron, this is great writing (you could be a journalist)! I had pictures in my head when I read these descriptions. Keep up with the great "learning@home."
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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Great 'show not tell' Cameron. I especially liked how you changed the mood for the wharf page. Ka pai! Keep up the hard work in lockdown Cameron.
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