Summer Sounds
As the wind blows and the trees rustle, I hear laughing and shouting from joy filled kids,
With the talking from the neighbours out on the deck, The trees rustle,
I start to hear thumping, Then the trees rustle,
Then off goes the wind, and bird song fills the air,
Then the wind comes back but blowing a tune,
A smile crosses my face.
Kia ora Cameron,
ReplyDeleteCharlotte here from the Summer Learning Journey team.
Wow! I am so impressed with your poem! My favourite lines are:
“Then off goes the wind, and bird song fills the air,
Then the wind comes back but blowing a tune”
This is so great! You have used personification and metaphor perfectly! Ka pai Cameron!
I will be marking this as an outstanding blog post so that you well get extra points.
Keep up the awesome blogging!
Ngā mihi,
Charlotte